Dorothys house
“There
goes our house!” Reported my Uncle, over the noise of the howling wind. All
five of us peeked out through the tiny crack in the trapdoor that was
protecting us from the tornado outside. Our house flew up and broke into
millions of pieces, then showered down onto the barn. My sister screamed! There
lying right next to the piranha pond was her most favourite doll, Jessica. “No,
no, no, no!” Everyone tried to pull her back, but she was too determined. She
wriggled out of our hands and ran over to Jessica then fell into the piranha
pond!
By
Emily Daymond-King
Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very powerfully written story. You have built up the tension really well before what was a horrible ending! Poor Jessica!
Great writing,
Mr Connor
Team 100wc