100WC
THE ATTACK
My heart was racing like a drag racer, I had absolutely no idea where I was and then I heard it! The magic alien spaceship that could turn invisible anytime it wanted. I started panicking and I could now see some dark clouds ahead so I turned away and tried to run from the magic alien spaceship, and then the violent storm was starting to form a great big STORM!! I ran and jumped for cover as the alien spaceship shot its laser beam at me and then out of no-where the cloud shot it with its lightning bolt.
By Matiu Inwood (Year 6)
Super writing for the 100WC Matiu. I really enjoyed reading this. I love the way that you have leapt straight in to the action - the reader knows that your main character is worried and that something either exciting or terrible is happening. Storms and aliens battling will always make an exciting story which is tricky with only 100 words but you have used your words carefully to build up tension. Keep up the great writing.
ReplyDeleteMrs Neale
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