RECOUNTS
This week room 11 have begun to write recounts about finding something valuable. To begin with room 11 created the above mind map using My Thoughts to record all their ideas about recounts.
We then watched a video clip about Ken Wilman whose dog, Madge, discovered a hard, soccer ball-sized piece of Ambergris on Morecambe beach in northern England. Ambergris, also known as whale vomit, is a valuable substance produced in the digestive system of sperm whales that was historically used in perfumery.
The students then set about planning an experience about an occasion when they found something of worth.
Here are a couple of the finished recounts...
Cloud Heaven
“I’m just going
to look in the cereal aisle”, I said to my mum as I kicked my brother in the
shin because he had decided to wear his Barbie bikini to the supermarket.
I ran down the
cereal aisle looking for the Taco’s. Tac‘o’s are my favourite type of cereal,
each ‘o’ tastes like a taco. Ah, there they are, I said to myself. I reached
out and grabbed the plainest box I saw. I ran back to the trolley gave my
brother a second kick and handed my mum the cereal box.
When the lady
at the checkout scanned the Tac’o’s her pupils grew big as she looked at the
computer screen. “You have just won yourself a trip to America!” exclaimed the
lady.
I think I was
really lucky to have grabbed exactly the right Tac’o’s box. Lastly, my brother
now wears a rainbow monkey bikini.
By Samantha Woolley
My
Jungle Adventure!
I was
exploring in the jungle slashing away at the vines and roots. I wasn’t looking
at the ground and before I knew it I was lying face down in the leaves and
dirt…
“Ow” I
said out loud, I rubbed my nose, I had skidded a bit, my nose hurt as well as
my whole face. I slowly looked up and WOW! I exclaimed because right there in
front of me was a giant ruby glistening.
Once I
had hacked my way out of the jungle, I choose a jeweller, called Joe Pin, and
claimed my 5 million dollars in one-dollar notes of course!
Now I
have retired and live in a big house with a pool and everything! Thanks to that
rock that made me fall over I have lots and lots and lots of dollar notes!
By Isla
Armstrong
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