Friday, 8 November 2013

In The Lake

I opened my eyes an inch and another inch. It was all clear. The lights were off and dad was snoring. Then I grabbed my gumboots and pulled my coat on. I crept down the stairs running my hand along the bumpy surface. I wrenched open the door, as I walked outside moonlight showered over me like a guardian angel. But I didn’t have much time I needed to reach the lake. Then I saw its shining surface staring at me. I planted the gumboots into the surface. Perfect, now they would think it was me. I started to run. . .

By Evie Richardson

1 comment:

  1. Evie, this is a super extract, perhaps one of the best that I have read so far! I enjoy the way that you have used variations of sentence length and your use of descriptions. WELL DONE!
    Lisa Team 100 WC

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