Friday, 8 November 2013

100WC
I turn on my engine I can hear the ROAR of all the race cars lining up along the starting line. Three, two, one, start all the cars ZOOM ahead of me. I was trying to start and all of a sudden BOOM my engine roared as I zoomed ahead of everyone and suddenly CRASH I shot through my front window and I went flying, flying as I waved at the shocked and surprised audience SPLASH. I fell into the lake I got tangled in all the weeds I couldn't get out I struggle to breath, HELP.

By Angelina Hardy

1 comment:

  1. Angelina what a creative way to get your character into the water! I loved that he waved while flying into the water. I sure hope he gets out okay. Great story keep up the good work!

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